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山高水往低，
情浅自分离。
相顾天涯近，
横飞海岸
平湖浅月风中梦，
碧海苍穹浪里沙。
水映青城烟雨散，
寒冬暖意雪依花
写的不错
不错不错不错。。。，
山高水往低，
情浅自分离。
相顾天涯近，
横飞海岸西
春夏秋冬
朗朗上口
《离离》
人间草木浅光阴，
含笑春花叶似云。
连理依依情切切，
相离默默雨纷纷
诗有误处，要作修改，只因无入口修改，请各位海涵！谢谢！
《离离》
人间草木浅光阴，
含笑春花叶似云。
连理依依情切切，
相离默默雨纷纷
朗朗上口
树叶红了 发表于 2021-6-30 19:49
《离离》
人间草木浅光阴，
含笑春花叶似云。
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老陳 发表于 2021-6-30 20:04
朗朗上口
陈友晚上好，谢谢欣赏支持评论{:11_491:}{:11_491:}{:11_491:}{:mocs_24:}{:mocs_24:}{:mocs_24:}
挺好
