我是阿娇 发表于 2023-3-27 13:02:02

喝火令.望春 阿娇 柳织千丝碧，桃开万蕊新。笛音吹

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西域大奔流 发表于 2023-3-27 13:36:31

喝火令最重结句三枪，一枪写实，二枪递进，三枪结尾，故喝火令又称三枪令。星子著名词人阿娇的喝火令，从偕咏到写实再到感叹，枪枪递进，深得词之三位味，五柳今何在，我独见阿娇/赞

蚂蚁 发表于 2023-3-28 08:26:09

好美的风景，好美的词！

時光擱準⑾ 发表于 2023-5-1 08:12:04

景美文好      

神秘UFO 发表于 2023-9-22 12:41:46

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