落星胡兆祥 发表于 2023-9-7 17:01:40

落星的《轻纱罩定……》

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陈龙阳 发表于 2023-9-7 20:29:58

一幅画一首诗

缥渺 发表于 2023-9-7 21:00:20

好美的五老峰

Anonymous 发表于 2023-9-7 21:08:20

好美的风景

落星胡兆祥 发表于 2023-9-7 23:50:25

风云突变，文笔遇袭。沉思再三，午夜拾趣。现将结句修订为：“擦个边球旋向东”，请起拍……

甜言蜜于 发表于 2023-9-9 06:33:07

拍的好看   

万里江山一秀才 发表于 2023-9-10 22:30:35

落星胡兆祥 发表于 2023-9-7 23:50
风云突变，文笔遇袭。沉思再三，午夜拾趣。现将结句修订为：“擦个边球旋向东”，请起拍……

“打个转儿回向东”更口语化些，也不赖呀！

万里江山一秀才 发表于 2023-9-10 22:32:20

拜读了！老先生好雅兴，真是“老夫聊发少年狂”也！哈哈哈哈！

時光擱準⑾ 发表于 2023-9-12 20:08:05

很壮观啊      

Anonymous 发表于 2023-9-12 20:08:18

好美的五老峰呀
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