黄友富绝律众家集评

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!important;">江西庐山市人。中华诗词学会会员、云帆诗友会顾问，萧雨诗社导师团成员。</span></strong></span></strong></span></strong></span></strong></span></strong></span></strong></span></strong></span></strong><br/></p></section></section></section></section></section><p><br/></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;letter-spacing: 0.578px;text-wrap: wrap;text-align: center;"><img class="rich_pages wxw-img" data-backh="434" data-backw="578" data-cropselx1="0" data-cropselx2="578" data-cropsely1="0" data-cropsely2="771" data-galleryid="" data-imgfileid="503061980" data-ratio="0.7509259259259259" data-s="300,640" src="https://www.shanglushan.com/plugin.php?id=wcn_editor:wx_img&url=https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/UlyVnKMFicxicBGoVsX0RBbJhTjOC3jHxficRzYM7QoObH2WzrUc41YxngqwNnFt3avZiazTUtJmN6vvcNqNKq1TXA/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&from=appmsg" data-type="jpeg" data-w="1080" style="letter-spacing: 0.578px;width: 100%;height: auto;"/></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;letter-spacing: 0.578px;text-wrap: wrap;"><span style="font-size: 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!important;">“有篇有句”是王国维【人间词话删稿】所推崇的有境界的好诗之标淮。该诗应合标:诗前三句中，数字、“一”“不”“二”，依次连接；加上转句中，“留二字”与结句的“憨厚”相呼应，使其结构绵密无缝——布局严谨，有篇之谓也。又有末句“憨厚是爹名”者，亮丽佳句也。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(192, 80, 77);word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(192, 80, 77);word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p data-tools-id="15981" 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SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(23, 54, 93);font-size: 13px;word-break: break-all !important;">【雷海基点评】</span></strong><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">下联两句似断还续的语境。这是问答句，诗在哪里？答是凌霜第一枝上。问题是，哪个是凌霜第一枝，看得出来吗？再说，枝上并没有文字，怎么看得出来。本是没有道理的，但读来又不怀凝，反倒觉得有一种朦胧美感。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all 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!important;">邀朋三两个，踏雪赏冬梅。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;">【王海亮点评】</span></strong></span><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">冬日得暇，邀朋小酌，品酒赏梅，自是乐事。“烧鱼加老醋，生火煮新醅”生活滋味浓郁，“闲中书中得，诗从陌上来”精神世界丰满，中两联见趣味，能读书，能作诗，能赏梅，而且并不故作清高，是为难得。</span></p><p data-tools-id="18114" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: justify;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"> </span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: justify;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all 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15px;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;">五老峰边</span></strong></p><p data-tools-id="89123" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">晓日出平湖，凌霄景亦殊。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">鸟鸣来复去，泉响有还无。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">展望秋山色，张开水彩图。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">胸怀情不禁，向晚碧崖呼。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;">【王惠维点评】</strong></span><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">由远景及声及色，尾联感情喷薄，颔联极佳。</span></p><p data-tools-id="70454" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 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Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">初夏过山村</span></strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">一望莺飞处，周遭草木葱。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">睡莲花出水，向日竹吟风。</span></p><p data-tools-id="45527" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">鸭戏池塘畔，鸡啼院落中。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">谁家田妹子，抢种小桥东。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;word-break: break-all !important;">【宋善岭点评】</span></strong></span><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">一切语景皆情语，本律是也。从“一望莺飞处”起，至“鸡啼院落中”皆为初夏常见景。一句“谁家田妹子，抢种小桥东”似神来之笔不仅为诗添彩更把农民的忙碌辛苦之情尽现眼底，好诗。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(192, 80, 77);word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(192, 80, 77);word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p data-tools-id="98831" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">溪水</span></strong></p><p data-tools-id="30102" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">不问凡尘事，清歌日夜讴。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">平凹难止步，曲折岂回头。</span></p><p data-tools-id="56520" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">带雨云边去，随风海角游。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">莫言含量小，可共一天秋。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;">【宋善岭点评】</strong></span><span style="color: rgb(123, 12, 0);"><span style="color: rgb(123, 12, 0);font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="word-break: break-all !important;">前三联从不同角度把</span>“<span style="word-break: break-all !important;">溪水</span>”<span style="word-break: break-all !important;">刻画的细节入微，堪好。</span></span><span style="color: rgb(123, 12, 0);font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;word-break: break-all !important;">惜尾联转合有些随意，凭黄兄之笔，应能写得更好。</span></span></p><p data-tools-id="11491" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"> </span></p><p data-tools-id="43668" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br style="word-break: break-all !important;"/></span></p><p data-tools-id="43668" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p data-tools-id="57000" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">民工咏怀</span></strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">又到中秋节，家山万里长。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">倚栏怀远水，举首望斜阳。</span></p><p data-tools-id="11125" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">未必烟云阻，只因工地忙。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">池鱼乡味美，留待过年尝。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 13px;color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;">【王海亮点评】</span></strong></span><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">语言朴素情感真诚。远水斜阳已见离情，池鱼香味更添愁思，中秋到了，一推再推，“只因工地忙”细节生动。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;"> </span></strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;">【王惠维点评】</span></strong></span><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">中秋本是万家团圆的日子，而农民工因工地忙而不能返家，只有倚栏举首来表达对家乡亲人的思念之情。尾联以池鱼乡味，过年回家尝鲜作结，聊为一宽慰耳。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"> </span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p data-tools-id="94222" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">秋登庐山</span></strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">烟锁含鄱口，霞飞五老峰。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">亭前风淡淡，谷底水淙淙。</span></p><p data-tools-id="30694" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">日出丛林鸟，云开古寺钟。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">登高抬望眼，一杖看秋容。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="color: rgb(23, 54, 93);font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;word-break: break-all !important;">【孔梅点评】</span></strong><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">此律登庐山看似平淡，但却善于从平凡中发现不平凡，而且表现得津津有味。与其说是文人的隐情处，不如说是历代文人渴望超拔俗世而达到跨时空沟通的寄托点。</span></p><p data-tools-id="33510" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"> </span></p><p data-tools-id="43698" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br style="word-break: break-all !important;"/></span></p><p data-tools-id="28590" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">院菊</span></strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">寒风侵落木，院菊独芳华。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">叶叶含晶露，枝枝散绮霞。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">晚成多意气，傲性赋诗家。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">正少高人伴，歌吟兴自赊。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;text-align: justify;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">【 王惠维点评】</span></strong></span><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">万木萧疏，此季节而唯菊独芳。亦是诗人情操之所在。颔联顺承合理，水到渠成。颈联一转，抒发情感，尾联见精神，然诗人能自得其乐，有恬淡情怀。</span></p><p data-tools-id="72319" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(192, 80, 77);word-break: break-all !important;"><br style="word-break: break-all !important;"/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"> </span></p><p data-tools-id="87713" style="margin-bottom: 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YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">浥露凝三径，凌霜第一枝。</span></p><p data-tools-id="50900" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">襟怀千载梦，酒醉半生痴。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">篱畔高风起，犹闻采菊诗。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p data-tools-id="56009" style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;word-break: break-all !important;">【梦欣点评】</span></strong></span><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">极具夸张，极具追捧，而一意圆转，首尾相顾，行文干净利落，气氛寂静浑穆，颇得五律韵味。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(23, 54, 93);font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"> </strong></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;font-size: 16px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(23, 54, 93);font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;">【王惠维点评】</strong></span><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">首联切题，写过东篱所见，而所见渊明石像，引发出全篇。颔联既是写景，又触景为情。颈联以凝炼的笔触概括了渊明的一生性情。尾联由虚入实，高风一语双关，辞虽尽而意无穷矣。</span></p></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><p><br/></p><p data-tools-id="37977" style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-wrap: wrap;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;color: rgb(29, 27, 16);font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"> </span></p><p style="letter-spacing: 0.578px;text-wrap: wrap;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><img class="rich_pages wxw-img js_insertlocalimg" data-backh="771" 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2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">翁哼小调和鹅语，犬看新家护院门。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">隔岸传来天籁韵，乡歌款款出南园。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p data-tools-id="49732" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: 2px;line-height: 1.75em;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(36, 64, 97);word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;word-break: break-all !important;">【抱朴书生点评】</span></strong></span><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">此作最好为第二联，“黄到眼”炼字于平凡中见新意，此为化腐朽为神奇，非一般造语可比也。</span></p><p data-tools-id="95770" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 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Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">游桃花源</span></strong></p><p data-tools-id="27925" style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">出游庐岳入幽关，曲径云深鸟语还。</span></p><p data-tools-id="46651" style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">半岭松涛声慢慢，一帘花影色斑斑。</span></p><p data-tools-id="92939" style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">风来谷底泉分韵，雾散桥头翠叠山。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">不是啼鸡催午昼，谁知世外是人间。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;">【卢象贤点评】</span></strong><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">桃花源诗甚多，不易出新。幽字易联想到幽冥，故着一还字救。松涛花影，是声色之搭配，若言不及花，则与桃花源不配也。第五句融以当地地名，而不纯嵌谷帘泉之名，作泉分韵，则诗意自来。尾联呼应首联之如梦如幻，暗用老子“鸡犬之声相闻”意，亦桃花源意也。重回人间，脉络分明。</span></p><p data-tools-id="76392" style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(192, 80, 77);word-break: break-all !important;"><br style="word-break: break-all !important;"/></span></p><p data-tools-id="99387" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"> </span></p><p data-tools-id="99387" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p data-tools-id="55954" style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: 2px;line-height: 2em;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">戊戌谷雨参加诗社换届会感怀</span></strong></p><p data-tools-id="21037" style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: 2px;line-height: 2em;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">五柳堂前诗结缘，吟山咏水复年年。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: 2px;line-height: 2em;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">华章担道心犹壮，好雨知时草更鲜。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: 2px;line-height: 2em;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">只望清流归远海，待期沃土出新莲。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: 2px;line-height: 2em;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">老夫虽退情难老，直把余晖写满天。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: 2px;line-height: 2em;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">【高朝先点评】</span></strong></span><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">谷雨是个农事季节，又是一个“诗歌节”。每逢谷雨，诗人以诗相聚，称“谷雨诗会”。此诗亦是谷雨诗会之作，却表现作者换届引退的别样情怀。诚可谓“老牛亦解韵光贵，不用扬鞭自奋蹄”。</span></p><p data-tools-id="49682" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: justify;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"> </span></p><p 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sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">春访家山</span></strong></p><p data-tools-id="44339" style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">望里云边大树村，四围山色入桃源。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">池前柳暗黄拖水，陌上花明绿到门。</span></p><p data-tools-id="97822" style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">落坐和风迎远客，攀谈细雨话新元。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">开春一片匡庐土，已是香泥满故园。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;text-align: center;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(23, 54, 93);font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 13px;word-break: break-all !important;">【苏俊点评】</span></strong></span><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">起句稍白。颔联熟中见生，柳暗一添得“黄拖水”便觉有意态；花明一加上“绿到门”便觉有生气，颈联以下皆亲切、朴实，学白乐天有得者也。</span></p><p data-tools-id="25016" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: normal;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"> </span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">【王惠维点评】</span></strong></span><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">全篇语言顺畅，通过远景近景，把对家乡的亲切热爱之情，描写得很是到位。额联“黄”“绿”“拖”“到”用的颇见功力。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">唯一不足，十三元韵分到词韵中为两部分。一是六部韵，一是七部部。“源”“元”“园”都是七部韵的。试看，七部韵这三个韵字都是一个读音吧，缺少节奏上的变化。虽然可行，但尽量避免为好。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;"><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(192, 80, 77);word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p data-tools-id="40360" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br style="word-break: break-all !important;"/></span></p><p data-tools-id="40360" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p data-tools-id="36225" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">故里秋色</span></strong></p><p data-tools-id="77159" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">凉风雨后过西村，岭上烟浮野色昏。</span></p><p data-tools-id="20269" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">老叟躬耕荷泽畔，幼儿嬉戏桂花园。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 15px;word-break: break-all !important;">半山蜜桔连枝叶，几处香葱带露痕。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">信步田间阡陌路，最怜桥下水潺湲。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;font-size: 13px;word-break: break-all !important;"><strong style="word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="color: rgb(23, 54, 93);word-break: break-all !important;">【王惠维点评】</span></strong></span><span style="font-size: 13px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;color: rgb(123, 12, 0);word-break: break-all !important;">全篇通过远景近景所见所闻，形象的描绘了一幅故乡秋色图。</span></p><p data-tools-id="66052" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 1.75em;letter-spacing: 2px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br style="text-align: center;"/></p><p data-tools-id="53922" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p data-tools-id="53922" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;letter-spacing: normal;text-align: start;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;font-size: 14px;word-break: break-all !important;"><br/></span></p><p data-tools-id="77729" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: 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break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">才闻柳外莺啼序，又见园中蝶恋花。</span></p><p data-tools-id="65322" style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">青石经销欧美国，小康走进万千家。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px;white-space: normal;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 16px;line-height: 2em;letter-spacing: 2px;text-align: center;word-break: break-all !important;"><span style="font-size: 15px;font-family: 楷体, 楷体_GB2312, SimKai;word-break: break-all !important;">文明古镇文风盛，且听书童读早霞。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 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鄱湖漂萍 发表于 2023-12-14 09:41:03

欣赏老师一组杰构！/赞/赞

1527029559 发表于 2023-12-14 12:36:39

点赞点赞！

洋葱和土豆 发表于 2023-12-14 16:23:30

蛮不错的呢

陈龙阳 发表于 2023-12-14 16:45:40

又涨知识了

缥渺发表于 2023-12-14 23:19:18

真是学习了

蚂蚁发表于 2023-12-15 07:19:41

黄老师诗词造诣高，拜读。

泓翼发表于 2023-12-15 20:09:37

绝律众家集评

甜言蜜于 发表于 2023-12-16 07:09:44

学习了

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